徐志摩《我是如此孤独而完整》习作

不能更草率了 英译汉还稍微有点感觉汉译英我到底怎么处理free verse的音律问题啊。

完全完全完全没有感觉。痛苦的存个档。

我独自冒着冷

i went lonely in cold

去薄霜铺地的林子里

to the forest grounded with frozen frost

为听鸟语 为盼朝阳

for a birds’ song, for a morning sun

为寻泥土里渐次苏醒的花草

for florets awaking from the dust

但春信不至 春信不至

but never reaches a spring sign, never reaches a spring sign.

我是如此单独而完整

i am so solitude and complete

在无数个夜晚

in countless nights

我独自顶着冷风

i stand alone against a bitter wind

伫立在老橘树下的桥头

at the bridge under an old orange tree

只为听一曲夜莺的哀歌

waiting for a lament melody from a nightingale

我倚暖了石栏上的青苔

i leaned and warmed up the moss on the railing

青苔凉透了我的心坎

the moss chilled my burning heart

但夜莺不来 夜莺不来

but never comes a nightingale, never comes a nightingale.