写作tips分享（2）| 减少不必要的重复

改写匠最近批改了好多四六级以及专四模考作文，发现了大家普遍爱犯的一个中式英语问题：不必要的重复。

这样一来，句子冗长，作文也不够简洁明了。看看下面的句子或词组应该怎样改正吧~

1. to accelerate the pace of economic reform 改为：to accelerate economic reform（pace这里为不必要的单词，直接用accelerate就能表达清楚）

2. we must oppose the practice of extravagance 改为：we must oppose extravagance（the practice of冗余）

3. departments of scientific research should take steps to make a proper readjustment of...改为：departments of scientific research should readjust （make a proper readjustment of...冗余，直接用动词readjustment就能表达清楚）

4. the national economic strength experienced the most rapid increase during this period 改为：the economy grew most rapidly during this period （the national economic strength可直接改为economy，experienced the most rapid increase冗余，直接用动词grew就能表达清楚)

这也是我们在英文写作中常常爱犯的中式英语问题，平时一定要提高警惕。

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