请各位指正下我蹩脚的小英文

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  Yangee 楼主 2009-09-22 22:57:37

  2 describe a car u wanna buy

  ectually i dont drive and hav no plan to buy a car so far, because of the traffical problems and the air pollution.

  if one day i have to buy one, Pugeot 307 hatch-back car would be the best choice for me.

  cos it has great looks, fuel economy and performance. as far as i know,its more firm than Japanese cars , and more safety improvements.

  although the its gasoline emissions is not the smallest, the car is drived smoothly and this is my favorite section. i believe i would like to enjoy my favourite music while i m driving.

  no matter how,the 1st importand thing is having the driver's license, driving without a license is very dangerous and may be sentenced.

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  Yangee 楼主 2009-09-22 23:00:14

  ...Y...

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  Yangee 楼主 2009-09-22 23:19:27

  我解释下，我要表达的graduated 不是毕业，是就读。。可以用in么？

  attended theater schools throughout his life =在他上学期间还加入了戏剧表演学院

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  Yangee 楼主 2009-09-22 23:40:05

  应该是耶。

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  Yangee 楼主 2009-09-22 23:42:39

  呃！我知道。wiki是好用，但不能完全表达我想说的意思呀。。。 当然，你的帮助让我很受益，谢啦~

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  Yangee 楼主 2009-09-23 00:18:21

  嗯嗯，明白的！ 之前草草看过一遍就觉得很有益，尤其是在介绍卡夫卡啊雪莱啊之类的人，用词很精准，表达很到位。是个好东西。。。 至于EN的教育背景问题.....还是跳过吧..我估计在口语中我也不会想到要说这个。

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  Yangee 楼主 2009-09-23 00:20:38

  我是水平有限，polish不出来啊。。捶墙。。。 总之，谢谢你哦，耶

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  Yangee 楼主 2009-09-23 00:35:40

  我.....

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