如何写歌词之第二节:Ellie Goulding「how long will I love you」赏析
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How long will I love you? 对你的爱会持续多久 As long as stars are above you, 只要你头顶的星星依旧闪烁 And longer if I can 如果我能延长生命 How long will I need you? 对你的情会延续多久 As long as the seasons need to follow their plan 只要四季依旧更替 How long will I be with you? 你我会相伴多久 As long as the sea is bound to wash upon the sand 只要大海依旧冲刷着海滩 How long will I want you? 对你的渴望会燃烧多久 As long as you want me to, 只要你对我的爱不变 And longer by far 直到永远 How long will I hold you? 就这样我们相拥会持续多久 As long as your father told you, 只要你父亲告诉你 As long as you can 只要你能做到 How long will I give to you? 把所有的一切都倾注给你 会是多久 As long as I live through you, 只要你陪伴在我身旁 However long you say 无论你所要多久 How long will I love you? 对你的爱会持续多久 As long as stars are above you, 只要你头顶的星星依旧在闪烁 And longer if I may 愿生命延长 爱你到永远 How long will I love you? 对你的爱会持续多久 As long as stars are above you. 只要你头顶的星星依旧闪烁 赏析: 用了问句法,就是用一个问句来写。how....? what...?等等这种问句来写。 这首歌用的是一问一答的形式就把词给写好了。 举例: Leonard Cohen的「did I ever love you」
Did I ever love you? 我是否深爱过你? Did I ever need you? 我是否需要过你? Did I ever fight you? 我是否争执与你? Did I ever want you? 我是否渴望过你? Did I ever leave you? 可我又是否离你而去? Was I ever able? 那些事真的发生过吗? Or are we still leaning 我们是否真的曾经依偎 Across the old table? 在那陈旧的方桌一旁 Did I ever love you? 我是否曾经爱过你 Did I ever need you? 我是否曾经需要你 Did I ever fight you? 我是否曾经伤害你 Did I ever want you? 我是否曾经渴望你 Did I ever leave you? 我又是否独自离去 Was I ever able? 那些记忆发生过吗? And are we still leaning 我们又是否真正依偎过 Across the old table? 在那陈旧的方桌一旁 Was it ever settled? 记忆真的尘埃落定了吗 Was it ever over? 往昔真的不复存在了吗 And is it still raining 十一月的大雨 Again in November? 还会再次如约到来吗? The lemon trees blossom 柠檬树再次盛开 The almond trees wither 可杏树却不再怒放 Was I ever someone 我真的是曾经那个 Who could love you forever? 能够爱你到地久天长的人吗? Was it ever settled? 那些真的是否尘埃落地? Was it ever over? 往昔岁月是否早已终结? And is it still raining 那十一月的大雨 Back in November? 还会继续吗? The lemon trees blossom 盛开的柠檬树 The almond trees wither 早已枯萎的杏树 It's spring and it's summer 正值盛夏,正值深春 And it's winter forever 可却如同恒久的寒冬 Did I ever love you? 我又是否曾经爱过你? Did it really matter? 那些又是否真实发生? Did I ever fight you? 又是否曾今争执与你? You don't need to answer 你不必给予我答案 DId I ever leave you? 我曾经是真正否弃你而去? Was I ever able? 那真的发生过吗? And are we still leaning 或是 Across the old table? 那陈旧的方桌旁吗? 赏析: 也是用了问句法,did...? 这首歌是一直问的形式把歌词给写了。