SAT作文评分规则及SAT高分范文模板
SAT写作满分评分规则(OG 105)：
An essay in this category demonstrates clear and consistent mastery, although it may have a few minor errors. A typical essay
1. effectively and insightfully develops a point of view on the issue and demonstrates outstanding critical thinking, using clearly appropriate examples, reasons and other evidence to support its position.
2. is well organized and clearly focused, demonstrating clear coherence and smooth progression of ideas.
3. exhibits skillful use of language, using a varied, accurate and apt vocabulary
4. demonstrates meaningful variety in sentence structure
5. is free of most errors in grammar, usage, and mechanics
提炼评分规则中的关键词就是一篇满分SAT作文应符合：水平发挥稳定，论证有效，例子恰当，结构清晰，论证集中，文章连贯，词汇多样、恰当，句式多样，少有错误。
OG官方满分范文（OG 123）
Prompt: Some people believe that there is only one foolproof plan, perfect solution, or correct interpretation. But nothing is ever that simple. For better or worse, for every so-called final answer there is another way of seeing things. There is always a “however”.
Assignment: Is there always another explanation or another point of view? (OG 119)
Sample Essay:
There is always a “however”. Each situation has its benefits and its drawbacks. In the field of market finance, we find a compelling example that supports this thesis.
The Roaring Twenties was a decade during which the American economy saw a rapid boom. In fact, America’s bull markets, such as the New York Stock Exchange had become so financially inviting by 1927 that even America’s middle class poured its money into America’s financial forums. Unfortunately, on October 4, 1929 the Booming Twenties came to an abrupt when the New York Stock Exchange crashed.
The Crash had many negative consequences. Most notably, the stock market crash of 1929 launched America into the Great Depression, a time of starvation and unemployment for millions of American citizens. The widespread optimism of the 1920’s quickly turned into an almost suicidal pessimism. Indeed, the Great Depression represents a crippling consequence of the stock market crash of 1929.
However, Franklin Delano Roosevelt established institutions and regulations to prevent future economic catastrophes. Cognizant of the Crash’s causes, such as fool corruption, overpriced stock values, and margin buying, Roosevelt implemented the Social Security Act, the FDIC, and stricter rules monitoring credit. His aggressive policies not only ameliorated the uncomfortable climate for the Great Depression, but also laid the groundwork for a safer, more successful economy.
The American public also realized the many positive results of the stock market crash of 1929. In particular, American citizens now have an entirely different fiscal outlook from the one they had before the Crash. Speculators have proven to be more prudent and insightful, as they often research market trends before investing. Perhaps most importantly, American investors are not as easily swayed by popular optimism and eager advertisement.
While the stock market crash of 1929 was the embryo of the Great Depression, the Crash also set the foundation for a sounder economy. If we recognize the good and the bad of the Crash, we are destined to make fewer economic mistakes.
为什么这篇文章能拿满分呢？
首先， 文章举了一个非常恰当的例子Great Depression，并且清楚地论述了Great Depression坏的一面跟好的一面， 有效并且深刻地论证了文章的观点“Each situation has its benefits and its drawbacks”。
其次，文章的结构非常清晰，中间的论证段每个段落都是按照Topic Sentence + Supporting details的结构展开的。
第三，段落与段落间的衔接也很连贯流畅：第三段的the crash紧接着第二段末尾的crash, 第四段、第五段分别用However和also来承上启下。
第四，文章的词汇多样恰当，例如第二段的roaring twenties 和 booming twenties.
第五，文章句式多样，长短句结合的很好。纵观全文，除了简单句以外，共用到了以下句型：
There be 句型
定语从句
So…that …
时间状语从句(when)
同位语解释
Not only…but also…
原因状语从句(as)
让步状语从句(while)
条件状语从句(if)
第六，文章看不到错误。
最后，文章作者水平发挥稳定，没有一会文采飞扬，一会错误连篇。
【注 意】这篇文章里还用到了很多高级词汇，如crippling, ameliorate, halt, aggressive等等，但这并不是文章的得分点，而是为文章增加了亮点，可以给考官留下好印象。其实，评分规则中并没有要求考生要使用高级词汇，所以 考生不需要强求自己使用。往往很多考生想使用高级词汇，但因为不懂其用法而经常用错，导致弄巧成拙，反而给考官留下坏印象。因此，考生可以不用强求自己使 用高级词汇，如果非要使用，一定要在懂得用法的情况下再使用。
透过这篇范文，我们来总结一下SAT高分作文的style:
1. 无口语话的词 （通篇看不到in my opinion这样的词）
2. 无程式化的词 （通篇看不到firstly, in conclusion这样的词
3. 例子可以是一个，但必须要恰当词汇高级是亮点但不强求
4. 句式在于多样而不在于复杂 （如上所列，这篇文章使用的句型都是一般高中生会写的句型，没有出现像倒 装、从句套从句这样的复杂句型）
5. 文章在于长，错误在于少。
An essay in this category demonstrates clear and consistent mastery, although it may have a few minor errors. A typical essay
1. effectively and insightfully develops a point of view on the issue and demonstrates outstanding critical thinking, using clearly appropriate examples, reasons and other evidence to support its position.
2. is well organized and clearly focused, demonstrating clear coherence and smooth progression of ideas.
3. exhibits skillful use of language, using a varied, accurate and apt vocabulary
4. demonstrates meaningful variety in sentence structure
5. is free of most errors in grammar, usage, and mechanics
提炼评分规则中的关键词就是一篇满分SAT作文应符合：水平发挥稳定，论证有效，例子恰当，结构清晰，论证集中，文章连贯，词汇多样、恰当，句式多样，少有错误。
OG官方满分范文（OG 123）
Prompt: Some people believe that there is only one foolproof plan, perfect solution, or correct interpretation. But nothing is ever that simple. For better or worse, for every so-called final answer there is another way of seeing things. There is always a “however”.
Assignment: Is there always another explanation or another point of view? (OG 119)
Sample Essay:
There is always a “however”. Each situation has its benefits and its drawbacks. In the field of market finance, we find a compelling example that supports this thesis.
The Roaring Twenties was a decade during which the American economy saw a rapid boom. In fact, America’s bull markets, such as the New York Stock Exchange had become so financially inviting by 1927 that even America’s middle class poured its money into America’s financial forums. Unfortunately, on October 4, 1929 the Booming Twenties came to an abrupt when the New York Stock Exchange crashed.
The Crash had many negative consequences. Most notably, the stock market crash of 1929 launched America into the Great Depression, a time of starvation and unemployment for millions of American citizens. The widespread optimism of the 1920’s quickly turned into an almost suicidal pessimism. Indeed, the Great Depression represents a crippling consequence of the stock market crash of 1929.
However, Franklin Delano Roosevelt established institutions and regulations to prevent future economic catastrophes. Cognizant of the Crash’s causes, such as fool corruption, overpriced stock values, and margin buying, Roosevelt implemented the Social Security Act, the FDIC, and stricter rules monitoring credit. His aggressive policies not only ameliorated the uncomfortable climate for the Great Depression, but also laid the groundwork for a safer, more successful economy.
The American public also realized the many positive results of the stock market crash of 1929. In particular, American citizens now have an entirely different fiscal outlook from the one they had before the Crash. Speculators have proven to be more prudent and insightful, as they often research market trends before investing. Perhaps most importantly, American investors are not as easily swayed by popular optimism and eager advertisement.
While the stock market crash of 1929 was the embryo of the Great Depression, the Crash also set the foundation for a sounder economy. If we recognize the good and the bad of the Crash, we are destined to make fewer economic mistakes.
为什么这篇文章能拿满分呢？
首先， 文章举了一个非常恰当的例子Great Depression，并且清楚地论述了Great Depression坏的一面跟好的一面， 有效并且深刻地论证了文章的观点“Each situation has its benefits and its drawbacks”。
其次，文章的结构非常清晰，中间的论证段每个段落都是按照Topic Sentence + Supporting details的结构展开的。
第三，段落与段落间的衔接也很连贯流畅：第三段的the crash紧接着第二段末尾的crash, 第四段、第五段分别用However和also来承上启下。
第四，文章的词汇多样恰当，例如第二段的roaring twenties 和 booming twenties.
第五，文章句式多样，长短句结合的很好。纵观全文，除了简单句以外，共用到了以下句型：
There be 句型
定语从句
So…that …
时间状语从句(when)
同位语解释
Not only…but also…
原因状语从句(as)
让步状语从句(while)
条件状语从句(if)
第六，文章看不到错误。
最后，文章作者水平发挥稳定，没有一会文采飞扬，一会错误连篇。
【注 意】这篇文章里还用到了很多高级词汇，如crippling, ameliorate, halt, aggressive等等，但这并不是文章的得分点，而是为文章增加了亮点，可以给考官留下好印象。其实，评分规则中并没有要求考生要使用高级词汇，所以 考生不需要强求自己使用。往往很多考生想使用高级词汇，但因为不懂其用法而经常用错，导致弄巧成拙，反而给考官留下坏印象。因此，考生可以不用强求自己使 用高级词汇，如果非要使用，一定要在懂得用法的情况下再使用。
透过这篇范文，我们来总结一下SAT高分作文的style:
1. 无口语话的词 （通篇看不到in my opinion这样的词）
2. 无程式化的词 （通篇看不到firstly, in conclusion这样的词
3. 例子可以是一个，但必须要恰当词汇高级是亮点但不强求
4. 句式在于多样而不在于复杂 （如上所列，这篇文章使用的句型都是一般高中生会写的句型，没有出现像倒 装、从句套从句这样的复杂句型）
5. 文章在于长，错误在于少。
