顾家北写作之每日一句 - 1
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8.20.19
通过和学生交流，老师可以熟悉学生的学习方式，然后调整自己的教学方式去适应学生的个人喜好，从而提升教学效果。
学生的句子：Teachers can be familiar with students' learning method though communicating with students, then adjust teaching style to meet students ' needs, thereby improving efficiency of teaching.
错误的原因：method应该用复数，方法不可能只有一个；then不是连词
提升的句子：By communicating with students, teachers can learn more about these children’s learning styles and adjust classroom methods to fit every learner’s preference to produce better outcomes.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/8Eel_3XWTJFxCI119tJq7g
8.19.19
人类活动是温室气体上升的一个主要原因， 而全球变暖导致极端的气候问题。
学生的句子：Human activities is a main cause of increasing greenhouse gases,while global warming could cause extreme climatic problems.
错误的原因：主谓不一致，activity可以是不可数名词，不需要用复数；while一般是表示对比，这句话不存在对比的关系
提升的句子：Human activity is a major factor in the increase in greenhouse gas emissions, and global warming has been linked to some extreme weather conditions.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/_N2S5DPha_dp2SlhDnXeGA
8.18.19
现在市场上的观念变化很大，很多消费者也希望自己的生活更加环保。
学生的句子：The attitude of consumption has a huge change，many consumers are willing to lead a eco-friendly lifestyle.
错误的原因：attitude of, has a change搭配不对；两个句子没有连词
提升的句子：There is a big shift in values, and many consumers want their lifestyles to be sustainable.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/P7wCYWIDIPZ7en9QDDbrxQ
8.17.19
没有节制的资源开采会破坏环境。
学生的句子：Unlimited exploitation of resources will damage to the environment.
错误的原因：damage作为动词的时候，是及物的。
提升的句子：The uncontrolled exploitation of resources can devastate the environment.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/AwdgqxTxrHOmqFmwyHmcZQ
8.16.19
小孩通过和同龄人玩游戏，可以享受非常活跃的社会生活。
学生的句子： Children can through playing with their peers enjoy an active social life.
错误的原因：through这个部分是状语，在句子的位置不对。
提升的句子：Children can enjoy an active social life by playing games with their peers.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/FwDSSUe0aGHClzP35gjEUg
8.15.19
父母应该对于孩子的作业进行辅导帮助。
学生的句子：Parents should give a hand to their children to help them work out the homework.
错误的原因：homework不可数，不需要加定冠词。
提升的句子：Parents should give children support in homework.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/-U7C2XyXqJEiB-9xCkyHiw
8.14.19
他是一个自学成才的音乐人，没有在学校学过音乐。
学生的句子：He is a self-educated musician who hadn’t studied music in the school.
错误的原因：这里没必要用完成时态表示结果，只要用一般过去式表示没学过就可以。
提升的句子：He is a self-taught musician without any experience in studying music at school.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/IlhXPui3kM-rdOFpVUmlAw
8.13.19
这些政策可以提高生产力，减少缺勤。
学生的句子：These policies can improve productivity, reduce the absent rate.
错误的原因：两个并列结构要用连词，而且absent rate没有这个说法。
提升的句子：These policies can improve productivity and reduce absenteeism.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/zqQtd7i9pn2toYJpFJXqsQ
8.12.19
职员们只有等到身体完全恢复了才能回到工作岗位，但是很长的病假会给公司带来比较大的损失。
学生的句子：Employees can not return to the job until they have recovered completely, but a long sick leave can have negative impact on companies.
错误的原因：cannot应该写在一起；impact可数名词要加冠词
提升的句子：Employees cannot return to duty until they recover, but long sick leave can be costly to companies.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/EQoAg6T-c8psZCXnPNTGsg
8.11.19
这个政策可以让公司领导更容易留住员工。
学生的句子：This policy lets company leaders easier to retain employees.
错误的原因：let somebody do something固定说法
提升的句子：This policy makes it easier for leaders to attain employees.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/5Oa_z0BKdoHr5lN7qbxhhw
8.10.19
如果一个国家的劳动力知识水平很高，那么很多企业都会蓬勃发展。
学生的句子： If one country can provide high knowledgeable workforce, this would promote many industries prospers.
错误的原因：knowledgeable前面应该加副词；promote后面不应该再出现动词。
提升的句子：if a country has a well-educated workforce, many industries can flourish.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/vTHddANw5rOBD-7BELB3Hg
8.9.19
如果博物馆免费，很多游客就会去这些地方。
学生的句子：If museums offer free admissions, many tourists will visit these places.
错误的原因：admission 一般不可数，表示入场的时候
提升的句子：If museums offer free admission, many tourists will visit these places.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/qxOaUuFHxfsUJ2rERqWD7A
8.8.19
很多大学缺乏资金，所以公司捐赠也很重要。
学生的句子：Because of a lack of funds, it is also important for many universities to receive financial support from private sectors. 错误的原因：private sector一般不用复数，而是用冠词the; receive也不是很好，receive是别人给的，没有突出捐赠的重要。
提升的句子：Many universities are short of funds, so private sponsorship is also important.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/9aUSmtG20q8-WgKXlmdQKw
8.7.19
家庭规模在很多国家在变小，因为很多人生活在小的核心家庭里（nuclear families），而不是和很多亲戚住一起。
学生的句子：Family size is getting small，resulting from amounts of people living in the nuclear families，instead of with many relatives. 错误的原因：family size前面没有冠词；amount不能修饰people
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/fOvM5dVE_-Xl0gY2CvKLWg
8.6.19
有些人选择一个工作做一辈子，因为他们雇主欣赏他们的忠诚度，愿意提供好的收入，退休金和医保。
参考句子：Some people choose to stay at their jobs for a lifetime, as their emplyers appreciate their loyalty and prefer to offer high salaries, pension and healthcare.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/OUOHYR4RIhgGlGTOBkvyhQ
8.5.19
如果年轻人依赖电脑，他们很难熟练使用一些基本技能，譬如说拼写能力，写准确的句子，做简单的运算。
学生的句子：If young people rely on computers,then they could hardly to learn some life skills,such as correct spelling,writing simple sentences and basic calculating.
错误的原因：could后面不能加不定式
提升的句子：If young people rely too much on computers, they cannot become proficient in basic skills such as spelling, writing correct sentences and doing simple calculations.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/_bhMmOVKGHlSV4MLYo29zQ
8.4.19
公立医院做手术要排长队，而私立医院能够更快提供治疗。
学生的句子：People have spent a long time in public hospitals getting therapies, but private hospital can do that quickly.
错误的原因：hospitals没有用复数;do that的that指代不清楚；然后前面的完成时态也很奇怪
提升的句子：State hospitals have long waiting lists for operations, while private healthcare providers provide faster treatment.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/ws03Vbo_-oOlOiss10r8og
8.3.19
通讯科技的发达导致人们越来越分散，因为人们不用见面也可以工作。
学生的句子：The development of telecommunications leads to dispersal in the population due to that people are able to work without face-to-face communications.
错误的原因：due to不能加that，communication不可数
提升的句子：Improvements in telecommunications have led to more dispersal in the population, since people are now able to work without meeting each other.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/guxKD0y8v7R9NTyQmjBOmw
8.2.19
高效的员工能为公司带来更多的利润。
学生的句子：An employee with high effective can bring profits to the company.
错误的原因：with 介词后面不能加形容词；company在这里不应该用定冠词特指
提升的句子：Productive employees can work to maximise profits of companies they work for.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/O3VMnUITR3x9_FF96gL0Gw
8.1.19
现在有很多公司都投资员工培训。
学生的句子：Many companies are willing to invest the training staffs.
错误的原因：invest不及物；staff本身已经是复数，不能加s
提升的句子：There are many companies investing in staff training.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/lO3ybihqSAocGlKiPuH9TA
7.31.19
博物馆会展示一些艺术品和文物，让游客了解某些地区的历史。
学生的句子：Museums exhibit artworks and historical objects, making tourists acquiring the cultural subjects and areas.
错误的原因：make somebody do something；acquire subjects是什么意思？
提升的句子：Museums display artworks and historical objects, which enable visitors to gain an insight into the history of local communities.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/8xx1tywgUuo6BC3y5vCyHw
7.30.19
那些上男校或者女校的学生没有足够的经验和技能去处理和异性的关系。
学生的句子：Students who brought up in single-sex schools are less able to relate to the opposite sex.
错误的原因：who brought up 这里少了一个be动词；bring up用词不当，这不是学校可以做的。
提升的句子：Those students who attend a single-sex school may not have enough experience and skills to handle the relationships with the opposite sex.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/TGUWnq3bCyGp_xbMEBz29g
7.29.19
小孩在家接受教育会错失学校所能提供的社交经历。
学生的句子：Children who learn at home may lose the social experience is provided by schools.
错误的原因：learn 这个及物动词，后面最好加宾语；is provided是完整的谓语，不能充当experience的定语
提升的句子：Home-schooled children will miss out on the social experience that schools offer.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/Q1bROkJZC-uBY9z513Q0hg
7.28.19
中学应该不断提高学生的学习技能，以后都可以用。
学生的句子：Middle school students should make an effort to improve the studying skill, which would be important for their adult life.
错误的原因：skill为什么不用复数，而是用特指？
提升的句子：Middle schools should help students improve study skills, which can be used later in life.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/eRjXk13IiNiNLbDQt6OSCQ
7.27.19
高效的员工能为公司带来更多的利润。
学生的句子：An employee with high effective can bring profits to the company.
错误的原因：with 介词后面不能加形容词；company在这里不应该用定冠词特指
提升的句子：Productive employees can work to maximise profits of companies they work for.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/fTA74W150PUQcGCidrCvow
7.26.19
经常用手机的学生可能考试成绩会比较低。
学生的句子：Students might be get low marks who use mobile phone regularly.
错误的原因： 定语从句要紧跟在名词后面；be+动词原形永远是错的
提升的句子：Students who use their mobile phones frequently may get poor grades.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/Q85SItgccotV_oIRqzZt0g
7.25.19
媒体喜欢报道暴力犯罪，因为可以吸引观众。
学生的句子：The media prefer to report violent crimes, because it can attract audience.
错误的原因：it指代不了前面的crimes.
提升的句子：The media prefer to report violent crimes, which can help attract viewers.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/1IxrqvSc6mLbEAIWFzwlsg
7.24.19
孙子孙女确实可以给老人带来极大的快乐。
学生的句子：Grandchildren really can give parents bring great pleasure.
错误的原因：give和bring，两个动词
提升的句子：It is true that grandchildren are a source of happiness for elderly people.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/posbDqWMRk94yMPFu_kMNQ
7.23.19
另一个问题是许多在职妈妈很难兼顾工作和家务。
学生的句子：Another problem is that many working mothers are difficult to balance work and family.
错误的原因：mothers是人，不能说difficult。
提升的句子：Another problem is that many working mothers have difficulty in keeping balance between work and family.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/kWfcbxDqvu3HpcgZznT3nw
7.22.19
尽管政府花了很多钱在公共设施上，道路的建设跟不上城市发展的步伐。
学生的句子：Although governments spend a lot of money on public infrastructures , the road construction cannot keep in pace with city development.
错误的原因：construction不可数，不用加the
提升的句子：Despite the huge public spending on transport infrastructure, road construction fails to keep pace with urban expansion.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/nR-yuGPmRVBjkT2Hiz7WPw
7.21.19
有人认为我们的性格特点是基因决定的，但是有人说教育可以改变一切。
学生的句子：someone considered that the character is decided by the gene, but others said that education can change it.
错误的原因：主句不应该用过去式，而且someone是“某人”的意思。
提升的句子：Some people argue that our personality traits are determined by genetics, while some hold that education can change everything.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/ioBNQKMSCx5M8Mxd9aLdZA
7.20.19
提价有助于减少水的使用，因为人们会避免没必要的用水去省钱。
学生的句子：Raising prices is helpful to reduce water consumption because people would avoid unnecessary water use to save money.
错误的原因：sth is helpful to do something没有这个说法。
提升的句子：Raising water prices can curb the usage of water because people would avoid unnecessary water consumption to save money.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/4hS0skwiFiwFOwkd4A80KQ
7.19.19
有很多老人通过推迟退休来保持独立。
学生的句子：Many elder people by means of putting of retirement to keep independence.
错误的原因：by means of是个介词词组，原句缺乏动词
提升的句子：There are many old people who intend to retain a sense of independence by putting off retirement.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/2gDvLIeybwf-rbUd091j4A
7.18.19
很多积极性本身很高的员工不喜欢公司的硬性指标。
学生的句子：There are many employees who are passionate about working are reluctant to company rigid index.
错误的原因：reluctant to后面要加do，而company是个名词；主句有两个are，两个动词。
提升的句子：There are many internally motivated employees who do not like external goals.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/Bg9mjZ7iA8CCChzANBpAhg
7.17.19
有很多人在困难的环境下也能够展示出必胜的坚定决心。
学生的句子：There are many people can show determination, even though they are in difficult situations.
错误的原因：主句有两个动词
提升的句子：There are many people who can show determination to win under adverse conditions.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/6HmoxhGWiManGjxH98q5Tg
7.16.19
生活在一个快速消费的时代里，我们很少将一个手机或者其他电子产品用很久。
学生的句子：Lived in a throw-away society, we seldom use a mobile phone or other electronic devices for a long time.
错误的原因：live不及物动词，没有被动，不可能在句首以过去分词形式出现
提升的句子：Living in a throw-away culture, we seldom keep a mobile phone or other electronic devices for longer.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/NthkTQ1mrGlxdmtptdsgLg
7.15.19
技术不断发展意味着我们需要接受新的想法，如果我们想成功。
学生的句子：The sustaining development of technology means that we should receive new thoughts if we want success.
错误的原因：sustain是及物动词，这里用现在分词很奇怪；receive new thoughts的表达也不好
提升的句子：Constantly changing technology means that we should be receptive to new ideas if we want to succeed.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/rGYAqPHiG6HudJ_l6CCIaA
7.14.19
廉租房虽然帮到很多买不起房子的人，但是会增加人们对政府的依赖。
学生的句子：Although low-rent housing benefit those who can't afford buying a house, it increases citizens' dependence on the government.
错误的原因：housing benefit主谓不一致
提升的句子：Although state housing can benefit those who cannot afford their own house, it can increase citizens’ dependence on the government.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/zM2UnsMsgky0gohmnyho0g
7.13.19
那些曾经经历过艰难困苦的人更加容易成功，因为他们有信心和毅力去克服困难。
学生的句子：the people who have experienced hardships are easier to get success， since they have enough confidence and grit to overcome adversity.
错误的原因：容易成功的容易应该是副词，而不是形容词
提升的句子：Those who experienced hardships are more likely to succeed, since they have enough confidence and grit to overcome adversity.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/tCKksDnrf3J474tsbG28Ug
7.12.19
学校应该重视创作艺术，可以激发学生的想象力。
学生的句子：Schools should pay attention to creative arts, can spark students’ imagination.
错误的原因：这个句子有两个动词，没有连词
提升的句子：School curriculum should include the arts, which can boost students’ imagination.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/2GQKXwxcFgeu6tpDb4tHAg
7.11.19
在那些不容易买到新鲜食物的社区，家长们需要经常去逛快餐店。
学生的句子：In those areas where are not easy to buy fresh food, parents need to frequent fast food outlets.
错误的原因：where 引导的定语从句要加独立的句子。
提升的句子：Parents need to frequent fast food outlets if they live in areas where fresh food cannot be bought easily.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/gnhIJcBC4SgXM8qxFp-5dg
7.10.19
一些人错误的相信钱可以购买快乐。
学生的句子：Some people wrong believe that money can buy happiness.
错误的原因：wrong是形容词，不能修饰动词。
提升的句子：Some people wrongly believe that money can purchase happiness.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/zv6Ro4RmHcLIZlzU_OMO0Q
7.6.19
城市里的学校和医院每年都被给予大量的公共资金。
学生的句子：Urban schools and hospitals every year both be given a large amount of public fund.
错误的原因：句子没有谓语，完全中英直译；every year是状语，应该放句首或句尾；
提升的句子：Schools and hospitals are provided with a large amount of public funds every year.
句子结构分析： Schools and hospitals 主语 are provided 谓语（被动语态） with a large amount of public funds 补语 every year. 状语
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/Fsie3IxUaU-8zQLcnqybqg
7.5.19
许多消费者被鼓励着去购买家具和生活用品去体验快乐的感觉。
学生的句子：Many consumers are encouraged to purchase home appliance and life products to experience a sense of happiness.
错误的原因：home appliance要加复数；
提升的句子：Many consumers are encouraged to experience a sense of happiness by purchasing furniture and household products.
句子结构分析： Many consumers 主语 are encouraged 谓语（被动语态） to experience a sense of happiness 补语 by purchasing furniture and household products. 状语
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/NXNelIKRn5gCQA60XtCKtQ
7.4.19
我们每天接触很多的广告。
学生的句子：We are everyday contact many advertisings.
错误的原因：everyday是形容词，every day是状语，应该放句首或句尾；are contact双谓语错误，are不能加动词原形；contact用词不当；advertising不可数名词
提升的句子：We are exposed to many advertisements every day.
句子结构分析： We 主语 are 系动词谓语 supposed 表语 to many advertisements 补语 every day. 状语
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/NGK4lO-bIBWnj-Qq-tgAFA
7.3.19
大学生被认为会有一个光明的就业前景。
学生的句子：College students are supposed to have a bright job prospect.
错误的原因：“就业前景”用job prospects即可，而不是a…prospect;
提升的句子：College students are supposed to have a bright job outlook.
句子结构分析： College students 主语 are supposed to 助动词 have a bright job outlook. 动词+宾语
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/bEP5ROxoJNw0j93DdqOO0Q
7.2.19
大量的民工涌入城市。
学生的句子：A large amount of labor workers have flooded into cities.
错误的原因：labor workers表达不对，而且a large amount of后面不能加可数名词复数。
提升的句子：A large number of migrant workers have flooded in cities.
句子结构分析： A large number of migrant workers主语 have flooded 谓语 in cities. 状语
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/A0NawOOE2dSrj__lpts41g
7.1.19
贫富差距正日益变大。
学生的句子：The gap between the rich and the poor is widen.
错误的原因：widen是动词原形，is 不能加动词原形，is widen双谓语了；
提升的句子：The gap between rich and poor is widening.
句子结构分析： The gap 主语 between rich and poor 介宾短语作后置定语 is 系动词 widening. 表语
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/aYmP2MslDHYEi-K72hYSsw
6.30.19
移民有时候要忍受比当地人更差的生活条件。
学生的句子：Immigrants sometimes need to withstand a poorer life condition than local residents.
错误的原因：conditions用复数比较多
提升的句子：Immigrants sometimes need to endure worse living conditions than locals.
句子结构分析： Immigrants 主语 sometimes 状语 need 谓语 to endure worse living conditions 宾语 than locals. than引导的比较状语从句
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/U2gZx3sNW_yMpLqO-oaUSQ
6.29.19
加强学校的纪律可能是解决孩子不良行为的一种办法。
学生的句子：Enhance schools’ discipline can be a solution to solve child’s poor behaviour.
错误的原因：solution本身有“解决方案的意思”，所以不需要再写solve,而且，这个to 是介词，加solve动词原形也不对，表示“…的解决方案”用a solution to sth.即可；child可数名词，要说children
提升的句子：Improving school’s discipline may be a solution to children’s bad behavior.
句子结构分析： Improving school’s discipline 主语 may be 系动词 a solution 表语 to children’s bad behavior. 介宾短语
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/ecSiKbxXHPaERjzrIfcArQ
6.28.19
旅游季的交通噪音是一个大问题。
学生的句子：The traffic noise in tourist seasons are a big problem.
错误的原因：主谓不一致，are应改为is;“big”用词不合适；
提升的句子：Traffic noise is an issue of concern to people during peak seasons.
句子结构分析： Traffic noise 主语 is 系动词 an issue of concern 表语 to people 状语 during peak seasons. 状语
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/kFPvlpKc_ckAnJavaCEf6g
6.27.19
政府的教育投资经常是不够的。
学生的句子：The educational investment of governments are usually insufficient.
错误的原因：are错误，主谓不一致，应该是is,因为主语不可数；investment是表示投资，这里也不合适。
提升的句子：The government spending on education is far from enough in many cases.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/Rsff2Dg7icUdKNPaGT6BFA
6.26.19
失业的人有时候觉得自己没用。
学生的句子：People who are under employment sometime feel powerless.
错误的原因：sometime不对，“有时”应该是sometimes
提升的句子：People who are out of work sometimes feel worthless.
结构分析： People 主语 who are out of work 【who】引导的定语从句 sometimes 状语 feel 系动词 worthless. 表语
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/mPp9d9FgXq-aG0qsW9nA7Q
6.25.19
老师可以通过小组或者一对一给予教导。
学生的句子：eachers can through teams or one-to-one tutorials to give instructions.
错误的原因：can through错误，因为through是介词，can应该加动词原形，这句话没有谓语。
提升的句子：Teachers can give students instructions in small groups or on a one-on-one basis.
结构分析： Teachers 主语 can give 谓语 students 直接宾语 instructions 间接宾语 in small groups or on a one-on-one basis. 状语
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/bnlkXv96VLJH-xRMoRvKGA
6.24.19
学生在小班可以获得老师的特别照顾。
学生的句子：Students can be better take care of by teachers in small class.
错误的原因：can be better take错误，有情态动词的被动语态是“can+be+过去分词”；
提升的句子：Students can receive special attention from teachers in small classes.
结构分析： Students 主语 can receive 谓语 special attention 宾语 from teachers 后置定语 in small classes.状语
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/Lh3rLGR0DZg7Fr0ZKmo8sw
6.23.19
一些父母更愿意扮演辅助性质的角色在小孩选择专业的过程中 。
学生的句子：Some parents are more like to play a supportive role in the process children choose a subject.
错误的原因：两个句子之间没有连词，children前面应该有连词；
提升的句子：Some parents are more willing to play a supportive role when their children decide a university subject.
结构分析： Some parents 主语 are 系动词 more willing 表语 to play a supportive role 补语 when their children decide a university subject.【when】引导的状语从句(主谓宾结构）
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/Snvl8FE9imm49RG20wnM6A
6.22.19
玩电脑游戏已经成了家庭关系紧张的源头 ,父母和孩子会吵架。
学生的句子： Playing computer games has become a main factor of intense family relationship it is because that parents and children will argue.
错误的原因： 两个句子之间没有连词，it前面应该有连词；
提升的句子：Computer games are a source of tension in families as children would argue with parents about this habit.
结构分析： Computer games 主语 are 系动词 a source of tension 表语 in families 状语 as children would argue with parents about this habit. 【as】引导的状语从句
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/A3Sdhzen1s--shRpDcj-VA
6.21.19
父母经常很在意孩子的学习成绩，因为决定了前程 。
学生的句子：Parents pay much attention to children’s academic grades because decide prospects.
错误的原因：because后面要加完整的句子，这个because后面的句子缺主语；much 一般不用于肯定语气；academic grades有点累赘的表达
提升的句子：Parents are concerned about the academic performance of children, which decides job prospects.
结构分析： Parents 主语 are 系动词 concerned 表语 about the academic performance of children,介宾短语做补语 which decides job prospects. which引导的非限制性定语从句
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/IUgbXqWuAst-KLL6RQ4COQ
6.20.19
父母应该准备好提供精神上的支持，一旦孩子遇到危险的时候 。
学生的句子： Parents should be prepared to provide mental supports once children meet dangers.
错误的原因： support不可数，不可以加s; once是“一旦，从什么时候开始”的意思，在这里不恰当。
提升的句子：Parents should be prepared to provide mental support when children face threats.
结构分析： Parents 主语 should be 系动词 prepared 表语 to provide mental support 状语 when children face threats. when引导的状语从句
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/jGGNaI7dbQZg2GTZwpmctw
6.19.19
许多国家都对可再生能源的发展有兴趣，因为它能让经济持续发展。
学生的句子： Many countries are interested in the development of renewable resource,because it is key to develop a sustainable economy.
错误的原因： the key to develop不对，这个to是介词，不是不定式，所以只能加动名词或名词；resource可数名词，要加复数。
提升的句子：Many countries are interested in the development of renewable energy because it is the key to sustainable economic development.
结构分析： Many countries 主语 are 系动词 interested 表语 in the development of renewable energy 补语 because it is the key to sustainable economic development. because 引导状语从句
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/u_qoFyiFCAWlpcXpR_f_QA
6.18.19
我们的生活方式很有可能减少将来的资源，因为我们用了很多一次性的产品，并且依赖很多电器。
学生的句子：Our lifestyle is likely to decrease resources of the future, because we use many throw-out products and rely on electrical appliances.
错误的原因：decrease resources表达不太地道，也没有throw-out products这个表达；
提升的句子：Our lifestyle is likely to deplete all resources of future generations because we use many disposable products and rely on electrical appliances.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/_ivmJcpbfs2aJFP9IVg9BQ
6.17.19
那些曾经经历过艰难困苦的人更加容易成功，因为他们有信心和毅力去克服困难。
学生的句子：the people who have experienced hardships are easier to get success， since they have enough confidence and grit to overcome adversity.
错误的原因：容易成功的容易应该是副词，而不是形容词
提升的句子：Those who experienced hardships are more likely to succeed, since they have enough confidence and grit to overcome adversity.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/ySgHefU8bLKTzppqOuNGeA
6.16.19
年轻人可以在社区大学或者技术院校里学习职业课程来提高工作技能。
学生的句子：Young people can take career courses in community university or technique colleges to improve their job skills.
错误的原因：university可数名词，没有复数或者冠词；没有technique college这个说法。
提升的句子：Young people can take vocational courses at a community college or a technical institution to improve job skills.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/GRN_KzGBOSmlgi7Nw950gw
6.15.19
一个健康的劳动力人群一般也会产出很高，因为健康的工作者能够集中精力在工作上并且完成度很高。
学生的句子：With teacher’s instruction, students can be able to understand the class contents better.
错误的原因：can和be able to的意思是一样的，不能同时出现；instruction可数名词，在这里有复数比较好
提升的句子：A healthy workforce is normally a productive workforce，since healthy workers can concentrate on their work and perform well.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/e0GEyB4tjW03c21FQVDn_g
6.14.19
有了老师的教导，学生可以很好的理解课堂的内容。
学生的句子：With teacher’s instruction, students can be able to understand the class contents better.
错误的原因：can和be able to的意思是一样的，不能同时出现；instruction可数名词，在这里有复数比较好
提升的句子：With teachers’ instructions, students have a good grasp of course contents.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/kmbN1PFR8pYRoP7ZSad5pA
6.13.19
通过行内好的人脉，年轻人可以获得有价值的信息。
学生的句子：Through interpersonal relationship,young people can acquire valuable information.
错误的原因：业内没有翻译出来；另外，relationship是可数名词
提升的句子：Through good connections in the industry, young people can gain access to valuable information.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/l6t-I8v1eqCalUkTg8isSA
6.12.19
老建筑会阻碍城市发展。
学生的句子：Old buildings will hamper the city development.
错误的原因：城市的发展是the city’s development
提升的句子：Traditional architecture may sometimes hider the development of cities.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/d6PTBcuPyVM-Y1_RNcIOWg
6.11.19
通过和老人交流，我们可以利用他们的智慧。
学生的句子：By communicating with the seniors ,we can make use of their wisdoms.
错误的原因：wisdom是不可数名词，所以用wisdom; senior不能加复数
提升的句子：We can draw on the wisdom of elderly people by talking to them.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/ZpDujx4M5cYpHCgthDO5Jg
6.10.19
父母应该准备好提供精神上的支持 。
学生的句子：Parents should be prepared to provide mental supports.
错误的原因:support是不可数名词，不用加s.
提升的句子：Parents should be ready to offer moral support.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/Rt8mhVuFcnfT8yfnieWJ4Q
6.9.19
很多大学都申请更多的政府拨款。
学生的句子： Many universities apply for government funds.
错误的原因：apply for并不是一个持续的动作，最好用现在进行时态或者是完成时态。
提升的句子：Many universities have called for more government funding.
6.8.19
很多富商选择将自己的大部分财富用在慈善事业。
学生的句子：Many merchants choose to invest most of their money in charity.
错误的原因：choose这个动词不是持续的，一般不用一般现在时
提升的句子：Many rich businesspeople have chosen to give away most of their fortune to good causes.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/zYEC2mzkbRaZngnD1WtiYw
6.7.19
上司的认可可以鼓励员工更加勤奋，因为得到鼓励之后，员工会更加自信，并且为他们所做的工作而自豪。
学生的句子：The recognition from leaders makes employees work hard, because they will feel more confident and be proud of what they are doing after being praised.
错误的原因：make sb do sth会有强迫的意思，鼓励某人，应该是encourage sb to do sth
提升的句子：Positive feedback from supervisors can encourage employees to work harder since staff members have stronger confidence and take pride in their work.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/s-fdvm0-_XqzaCrrJNKiHw
6.6.19
竞技体育对我们健康有帮助，让我们释放负面的情绪，和攻击性。
学生的句子：competitive sports are helpful to our health, which can release our negative emotions and aggression.
错误的原因：定语从句修饰health不恰当
提升的句子： Competitive sports can improve our health by releasing our negative emotions and aggression.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/iSXuod3hKSHNqp-iNss_VA
6.5.19
现在工作环境压力很大，特别是经济不景气的时候，人们要去应对工作重压。
学生的句子：People feel under pressure in working environment, they have to deal with the heavy burden in tough economic times.
错误的原因：两个单独的句子之间没有任何的连词，不对，应该在第二句前面加一个because；environment可数名词，也没有冠词
提升的句子：Working conditions today are very stressful, especially in tough economic times, when people have to handle a heavy workload.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/tZ_aWX687qvQPI9DvhPVtg
6.4.19
在职培训使人们更加容易地去发展自己的职业。
学生的句子：Job training makes people easier to advance their careers.
错误的原因：easier不能够修饰people，不能充当这个宾语的补语，因为人没有难易之分。
提升的句子：On-the job training enables people to advance their career more easily.
句子结构分析： On-the job training 主语 enables 谓语 people 宾语 to advance their career more easily.补语
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/AJqW1C4I193EhP676PfV-g
6.3.19
在移动设备上看书已经变得很普遍。
学生的句子：It is common that people read books on mobile devices these days.
错误的原因：没有it is common that这个写法
提升的句子：It is common to read books on mobile devices these days.
句子结构分析： It 形式主语 is 系动词 common 表语 to read books 真正的主语 on mobile devices 状语 these days 状语
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/cfDfxaG94xC49RUaX_mv-g
6.2.19
有闺蜜对于快乐是很重要的。
学生的句子：A closeness with others is necessary to feel happy.
错误的原因：A closeness with others表达不对；feel happy的主语不知道是什么。
提升的句子：Having close friends is an important factor contributing to happiness.
句子结构分析： Having close friend 主语 is 系动词 an important factor 表语 contributing to happiness. 现在分词做后置定语
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/TLmePHX9KC1dtTXRK8XJUw
6.1.19
快乐是一种心态，但是很多人总是莫名其妙地不开心。
学生的句子：Happiness is a state of mind, however, many people are for unknown reasons unhappy.
错误的原因：however不是连词，不能连接2个句子；however后面那句语序不合适，for unknown reasons是状语，应该放在句末。
提升的句子：Happiness is a state of mind, but some people are unhappy for wrong reasons.
句子结构分析： Happiness 主语 is 系动词 a state of mind 表语 but 连词 some people 主语 are 系动词 unhappy 表语 for wrong reasons. 状语
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/Z4CCBO4rPDSF7BizeKxCtQ
5.31.19
对物质品的追求有可能产生压力。
学生的句子：The strong desire for consumers may likely to put pressure on people.
错误的原因：consumers是“顾客”的意思，不是“物品”；likely是副词或者是形容词，不能充当谓语。
提升的句子：The strong appetite for consumer goods may be a cause of stress for people.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/_vwfEwYFQ5TPhhFdFI3xmw
5.30.19
很多年轻人都不能够赚到足够的钱去养家。
提升的句子：Many young people are unable to earn sufficient money to raise their family.
结构分析： Many young people 主语 are unable to 谓语+表语+补语 earn sufficient money 宾语 to raise their family 状语
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/GHuD-PyXu16Ynv_Hqivkkg
5.29.19
这个政策的主要目的是去提高文化普及率。
学生的句子：The main purpose of this policy to improve the spread rate of culture.
错误的原因：句子缺系动词，应该是is to；没有spread rate这种说法。
提升的句子：One primary purpose of this policy is to promote literacy.
结构分析： One primary purpose 主语 of this policy 后置定语 is 系动词 to promote literacy. 表语
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/iFT9ts5uLz_h22PgpGp1Dw
5.28.19
机器人可以做的一个事情是去扫地。
学生的句子：Sweeping floors is one of the responsibility doing by robots.
错误的原因：responsibility可数，one of+可数名词复数，应该是responsibilities；doing不合适，不能是主动，可以改为done
提升的句子：One task a robot can perform is to sweep floors.
结构分析： One task 主语 a robot can perform 定语从句（省略that） is 系动词 to sweep floors. 表语
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/LgoTIPa9zh6n0IInxmwV_A
5.27.19
很多年轻人不习惯做重复的工作，因为这样他们就没有动力去学新的东西。
学生的句子：Many young people are unaccustomed to doing repetitive task, because these can’t motivate them to do creative work.
错误的原因：task是可数，所以用tasks；不能缩写，cannot；these指代不明，不知道是说people还是说task。
提升的句子：Many young people are tired of doing repetitive tasks since they are not stimulated to learn something new.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/-4Q8duxKcn47xGHBUoxaIA
5.26.19
职员们只有等到身体完全恢复了才能回到工作岗位，但是很长的病假会给公司带来比较大的损失。
学生的句子：Employees can not return to the job until they have recovered completely, but a long sick leave can have negative impact on companies.
错误的原因：cannot要连写；sick leave不用加冠词，而negative impact要加冠词。
提升的句子：Employees cannot return to duty until they recover, but long sick leave can be costly to companies.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/bPjycu7zl374-lwB-pQEpA
5.25.19
高度自动化的工厂可以完成更多任务，产品的质量也更高。
学生的句子：The highly automated industries can handle more works, and their products are higher quality.
错误的原因：work不可数名词，不可以加复数；product是产品，产品不是质量，主语和表语不一致。
提升的句子：Highly automated factories can handle more work and their products are of higher quality.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/sO0P_t7NM0yo3g0k-L6Tiw
5.24.19
如果职员不能够集中精力工作的话，雇主就会为失去的生产力付出比较高的代价。
学生的句子：Employers have to pay greater price for lost productivity if their employees cannot concentrate on work.
错误的原因：price可数名词，没有冠词。
提升的句子：Employers have to pay a greater price for lost productivity if employees cannot concentrate on work.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/zNjwr6hBSo19vWf2CmqZWw
5.23.19
在家工作的雇员很容易被家庭事务打扰。
学生的句子：Employees who work at home can be disrupt easily by family affairs.
错误的原因：被动语态be done，所以被打扰应该是be disrupted
提升的句子：Teleworkers can be easily disrupted by domestic tasks.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/eY355NZJQS6-SomdaOScPA
5.22.19
移动设备在我们生活的每个方面都对我们有好处。
学生的句子：Mobile devices are benefit to us in every aspect of life.
错误的原因：are beneficial 或者是are of benefit；生活的每天，应该是lives
提升的句子：Mobile devices have benefited us nearly in every aspect of our lives.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/qoyRBrSl5gw9URndns07eQ
5.21.19
对物质品的追求有可能产生压力。
学生的句子：The strong desire for consumers may put pressure on people.
错误的原因：consumers是消费者，是对物品的追求不是对消费者的追求。
提升的句子：The pursuit of material goods is likely to create stress.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/909G8xY7jAKpd5mYk4ub5A
5.20.19
和一个团结的团队工作可以增加员工工作满意度。
学生的句子：Working in a team with cohesion can make employees feel more satisfied with their job.
错误的原因：make sb do sth 一般会有强迫的语气，让员工更满意，make employees more satisfied
提升的句子：Working with a close team can raise job satisfaction.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/UJjBU2ki9bQJSaGN5ahrjA
5.19.19
一个稳定的工作很少能够留住喜欢挑战的年轻员工。
学生的句子：A stable work seldom can retain young employees who always tend to seek challenges.
错误的原因：work当作可数名词是作品，不可数名词是工作，这里改为A steady job; seldom一般不放在助动词前。
提升的句子：A steady job can hardly retain young employees who are always keen to seek challenges.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/T_y31s-F7BDUXImEwL289g
5.18.19
现在对于大部分人来说，获得固定的工作很难。
学生的句子：Finding a fixed job is difficult for the majority of people nowadays .
错误原因：这里用不定式比用动名词更好，动名词一般是描述一个发生了的事实。
提升的句子：It is difficult to find a regular job for the majority of people in today’s world.
成分分析： It 形式主语 is 系动词 difficult 表语 to find a regular job 【to do】做真正的主语 for the majority of people in today’s world. 状语
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/M6DH0UwXsC2R6wLfayHBfg
5.17.19
政府的首要任务是解决年轻人的失业问题。
学生的句子：The top priority for governments is to tackle with the unemployment of young people.
错误原因：tackle的用法直接tackle sth.即可，不需要加with
提升的句子：The priority of governments is to tackle employment problems of young people.
成分分析： The priority of governments 主语 is 系动词 to tackle employment problems of young people.表语
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/iXW7fvn1BqGtlmO7H-THXA
5.16.19
很多年轻人失业，因为经济不景气。
学生的句子：Many young people lose jobs because economy not good.
错误原因：because从句句子不完整，缺系动词is
提升的句子：Due to the gloomy economic outlook, many young people have lost their jobs.
成分分析： Due to the gloomy economic outlook 状语 many young people主语 have lost 谓语 their jobs. 宾语
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/tYTSXm0UP-MWD4BS-Rm7vQ
5.15.19
一些烹饪技艺的消失是因为快节奏的生活。
学生的句子：The disappearance of some cooking techniques is because the fast pace of life.
错误原因：because应该加句子，而不是名词短语；一般没有名词+is+because的说法
提升的句子：The fast pace of life has led to the loss of some traditional cooking techniques.
成分分析： The fast pace of life主语 has led to 谓语 the loss of some traditional cooking techniques. 宾语+后置定语
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/julHPOT4xKceiejxIjEgfw
5.14.19
很多人愿意向其他人伸出帮助之手。
学生的句子：Many people like offer others a helping hand.
错误原因；like和offer双谓语，可以改为like to offer
提升的句子：Many people are willing to give a helping hand to others.
成分分析： Many people主语 are willing to 谓语 give a helping hand 表语 to others. 补语
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/fQh_BqcgVHfXA2RSgRL5-Q
5.13.19
经济支持对贫困国家极为重要。
学生的句子：Financial supports is of great importance to underdeveloped countries.
错误原因：support不可数，不能加s，只能原形；importance to的to是介词，要加名词。
提升的句子：Foreign aid is of great importance to underdeveloped countries.
成分分析： Foreign aid主语 is 系动词 of great importance 表语 to underdeveloped countries 介宾短语作状语
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/8ObvMC42utrmOiX4NIHrbA
5.12.19
失业的人有时候觉得自己没用。
学生的句子：People who are under employment sometime feel powerless.
错误的原因：失业是unemployed, jobless, out of work
提升的句子：The jobless people sometimes feel unworthy.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/bcEx9nDxH6JuTH1-umMRXw
5.11.19
移动设备在我们生活的每个方面都对我们有好处。
学生的句子：Mobile devices are benefit to us in every aspect of life.
错误的原因：are beneficial 或者是are of benefit；生活的每天，应该是lives
提升的句子：Mobile devices have benefited us nearly in every aspect of our lives.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/zMMkT3Q-V6ld0K9Emv7zFg
5.10.19
当环境变得不利的时候，一个运动员的精神状态是很重要的。
学生的句子：The mentality of sportsman is crucial when they are at disadvantaged position.
错误原因： sportsman可数名词，不能裸奔；position也是如此
提升的句子：when conditions become adverse, an athlete's mental attitude is important.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/HcbTdsIxvJcKsPrdiWjzYA
5.9.19
在一些边远的地方，经济机会很少。
学生的句子：In some remote areas, economic opportunities are little.
错误原因：little不能修饰可数名词的复数。
提升的句子：Economic opportunities are scarce in remote areas.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/onG2onjIU-XrMIqazct17A
5.8.19
一个充满能量的员工队伍对公司的利润是很重要的。
学生的句子：A group of staff full of energy is important to make profits for a company.
错误原因：somebody/something is important to要加something，因为to是介词。
提升的句子：An energetic workforce is important to a company’s bottom line.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/F8wzYI8YtoX2CSCZOKs1PQ
5.7.19
年龄大的人可能占据着公司的大部分管理职位。
学生的句子：Those senior people occupy the most positions in the company.
错误原因：the most 后面一般加形容词的最高级，不能够加名词
提升的句子：People in 50s or 60s may occupy most senior positions of the corporate world.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/hhJ6HPPlsrHfwK9bcBFxwA
5.6.19
为了研制新药，做医疗试验是必要的。
学生的句子：In order to develop new drugs, doing medical tests is necessary.
错误原因：doing tests不能充当develop new drugs的逻辑主语。
提升的句子：It is necessary to do medical research to develop new drugs.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/wmlun61-Fbl0wgXx1UBJtA
5.5.19
注册大学课程是年轻人一个好的选择。
学生的句子：Enrolling university courses is young people a good choice.
错误原因：enroll不及物动词，后面要加介词；young people a good choice语序不对
提升的句子：Signing up for college courses is a good choice for young people.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/PaKWIp5MAiBxXFHG2JyLZg
5.4.19
太空研究使我们有可能找到一个宜居的星球。
学生的句子：Space research make it possible for us to find a habitable planet.
错误原因：主谓不一致
提升的句子：Space exploration makes it possible for us to find a habitable planet.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/8CGa9kjTagx5CJ8RtnneLw
5.3.19
很多国家都认为给年轻人增加教育机会是必要的。
学生的句子：Many countries think giving young people increase educational opportunities is necessary.
错误原因：giving somebody something是固定的说法，不能加动词
提升的句子：Many countries consider it necessary to increase educational opportunities for young people.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/NRY1LNIQ5xKSGh3pZLEKzA
5.2.19
保护环境是必要的，这会直接影响自然资源的保护。
学生的句子：Protect the environment is necessary because it can direct impact natural resources’ protection.
错误原因：动词原形protect不能直接作主语；direct为形容词，不能修饰动词impact；natural resources’ protection中不需要用所属格来修饰protection。
提升的句子：It is necessary to protect the environment because it has a direct impact on the preservation of natural resources available for us..（正确的句子朗读请听音频）
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/WvEyojYgfblrpFft7oCtSw
5.1.19
修水坝可以发电，控制洪水，抗旱，但是也会改变地貌。
1.学生的句子：Constructing dams can produce electricity, manage floods, fight droughts, however, it will change landscape as well.
2.错误原因：句子Constructing dams can produce electricity, manage floods, fight droughts和句子it will change landscape as well之间缺少连接词，而however为副词，不能连接两个句子；produce electricity, manage floods, fight droughts为并列词组，fight droughts之前缺少and连接。
3.提升的句子：Constructing dams can produce electricity, manage floods and fight droughts, but it will change landscape as well.（正确的句子朗读请听音频）
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/NPLZMcFFTht4jdzNyADuJQ
4.30.19
保留监狱的目的不仅是为了惩罚犯罪者，也帮助他们在未来过上正常的生活。
学生的句子：The purpose of prisons is not only punish offenders, but also help them live a normal life in the future.
错误原因：动词原形不能直接作表语，所以用not only …but also连接的并列的表语punish offenders和help them live a normal life in the future使用形式有误。
提升的句子：The purpose of running prisons is not only to punish offenders but also to help them live a normal life in the future.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/XTgrBM65-xoKd0xzErvKyg
4.29.19
汽车尾气排放增加，城市居民遭受健康问题。
学生的句子：As automobile emission increases, city dwellers suffer from healthy problems.
错误原因：automobile emissions 表示“汽车尾气”，这句话中emission应为名词复数形式，后面的动词increase也应为复数形式。“健康问题”应用health problems来表达而不是用healthy。
提升的句子：As automobile emissions increase, city dwellers suffer from health problems.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/IMwWD_0oHjP6zYahurYJMw
4.28.19
年轻人需要提高理财能力和学习处理财务的问题。
学生的句子：Young people need to learn how to improve their abilities of managing finances and deal with the financial problems.
错误原因：ability to do something是固定的说法
提升的句子：Young people need to learn how to improve their abilities to manage finances and deal with financial problems.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/0EY7H70lc9bAGrzlXT4LKw
4.27.19
一些人造景观在吸引游客的同时也改变了城市的景观。
学生的句子：When draw attention of tourists, some man-made attractions have changed the scenic view at same time.
错误原因：从句When draw attention of tourists中缺少主语；at the same time为固定搭配，不能去掉the。
提升的句子：When drawing attention of tourists, some man-made attractions have changed the scenery of some scenic spots.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/KJCtzpTWmEwOQO3wxm0G9A
4.26.19
过多的看电视时间对孩子的健康，还有社会技能的发展有害。
学生的句子：Excessive screen time is detrimental to child’s health, also harmful to the development of social skills.
错误原因：detrimental to child’s health和harmful to the development of social skills这两个并列表语之间缺少连接词and,而also为副词，并不能起连接的作用。
提升的句子：Excessive screen time is detrimental to children’s health and social development.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/9HOCgAB6TtwKTmkoT8pArw
4.25.19
机器人可能会取代人工, 而失业率上升导致社会不稳定。
学生的句子：Robots may take place of labor work, and rising unemployment rate will result in an unstable society.
错误原因：rate可数名词，要加冠词。
提升的句子：Robots may replace human labour and cause job cuts, which can pose a threat to social stability.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/qyrm5R5gx-7jl8JpZhzIog
4.24.19
消费者能够体验不同的异国食物并且能了解到不同国家的食物文化。
学生的句子：Consumers can experience diverse foreign foods and understand food culture of different countries.
错误原因：food culture后面有介词短语of different countries进行修饰，前面需要加定冠词the。
提升的句子：Consumers can sample different exotic foods and gain an insight into the food culture of different countries.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/hdkX4HSopPrQ3goqvPrdXQ
4.23.19
要保持一个免费的医疗系统是不容易的，因为其他的公共服务也需要资金来运转。
学生的句子：It is difficult to maintain free medical system because other public services need funds
错误的原因：system可数名词，不能没有冠词
提升的句子： it is not easy to maintain a system of free medical care, because there are many public services competing for funding as well.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/bqje3if6zWknijYtPSR2zg
4.22.19
我们的生活方式很有可能消耗完将来的资源，因为我们用很多随一次性产品，并且依赖很多电器。
学生的句子：Our lifestyle is likely to decrease resources of the future, because we use many throw-out products and rely on electrical appliances.
错误的原因：decrease是不及物动词，reduce是及物动词，降低
提升的句子：Our lifestyle is likely to deplete resources in the near future, as we use a lot of throwaway products and rely on many electrical appliances.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/l96blKYmYf5X59_r6reT9g
4.21.19
学生们可以在大学中获得知识，在他们选择的领域进行研究。
学生的句子：Students can acquire knowledge in the university and then do researches in areas that they have chosen.
错误原因：do research为固定搭配，researches不用复数形式。
提升的句子：Students can acquire knowledge at university and do research on their favourite subjects.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/Y5fDPpNPGdbEeq_Rpz39sw
4.20.19
犯罪会减少，人们会生活在安宁的环境中。
学生的句子：The criminal rate will be decrease, and people will live in a peaceful environment.
错误原因：will be decrease错误，使用一般将来时的时候，will加动词原形decrease即可，不需要be动词。
提升的句子：The crime rate will decrease, and people will live in a peaceful environment.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/7w5HuNcDPz-tq5eOPVLYwA
4.19.19
年轻人的创意会打破传统，但是也会带来经济的效益。
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/h787TWU7PWGYk0ekMepqZA
4.18.19
年轻人接触媒体的暴力内容，将暴力当做可以接受的行为。
学生的句子：Young people expose to violent contents of media ,and regard violence as an acceptable behavior.
错误原因：expose to词组使用有误，be exposed to和expose oneself to为固定搭配。 content表示媒体当中的暴力内容时应为不可数名词，故该句中复数形式错误。
提升的句子：Young people who are exposed to violence in media tend to regard acts of violence as acceptable behaviour.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/SA1eywDdpjFTIT0hHdVvZg
4.17.19
人们现在需要未雨绸缪和为退休省钱。
学生的句子：People need to save money for the future retirement life in case something happened.
错误原因：in case表示某种行为的原因，现在做事为了防止以后某事的发生，主句用的一般现在时，从句应对应使用一般现在时，谓语动词happened时态有误。
提升的句子：People need to save money for retirement and emergencies.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/QnIQ0cycz_Z8SUKZmAIhWQ
4.16.19
随着新的通信技术，人们能够交换信息，并及时解决问题。
学生的句子：With the new communication technology, people can exchange information and solve the problem in time.
错误原因：new communication technology为泛指而不是定指，所以前面不需要用定冠词the 。 solve the problem中problem应该也不用定指，定冠词the多余，并且problem应为复数概念，应用复数形式。
提升的句子：With new communication technology, people can exchange information and solve problems promptly.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/c7jz2z4sfPeCSQY1k3aGIQ
4.15.19
空运消耗大量的化石燃料，释放温室气体 。
学生的句子：Air freight consumes large number of fossil fuels and produce greenhouse gas emissions.
错误原因：表示大量的化石燃料时，fossil fuels前面应用a large amount of来进行修饰 而不是large number of；produce主谓不一致。
提升的句子：Air freight consumes a large amount of fossil fuels and produces greenhouse gas emissions.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/zuu8QGTMNpZWY2zGm007JA
4.14.19
人们很少有时间做家务，或为自己准备餐点 。
学生的句子：People have few time to do the household work or cook for themself.
错误原因：time为不可数名词，前面不能用few进行修饰；few修饰可数名词复数形式； Housework不可数名词，不应该加定冠词，不需要特指；反身代词“他们的”正确行使应为themselves。
提升的句子：People have little time to do housework or cook for themselves.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/WztWuU0TtOSVb2uKaaZoCA
4.13.19
消费者倾向于购买最新的数码产品，而不是留住旧的。
学生的句子：Consumers tend to purchase newest digital products rather than use old one longer.
错误原因：newest最高级，前面要加定冠词；one代指前面的可数名词product的复数形式products，此处应该用其复数形式ones。
提升的句子：Consumers tend to purchase the latest products rather than use old ones longer.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/qiGDsZQ1XtPvuhunhsBtQg
4.12.19
犯罪记录会损害声誉，危害人们的职业生涯。
学生的句子：Criminal records can undermine people’s reputation, which is harmful to people‘s career.
错误原因：定语从句到底是修饰reputation，还是一句话？指代不清楚。
提升的句子：Criminal records can damage one’s reputation and jeopardise his or her career.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/VNhbx8_11k9Dnv7ldKNg7g
8.28.18
因为规模化经营，跨国公司可以让很多小公司破产。
学生的句子：Because operating on a large scale, multinational corporations can make many small businesses go bankrupt.
错误的原因：because是个连词，要加独立的句子
提升的句子：Transnational companies, with massive economies of scale, can drive many small firms out of business.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/TPDJ7xKKdCob3RvTWYIilA
8.27.18
教育节目应该被推广去增加大家的知识。
学生的句子：series of education should be promoted to increase public knowledge.
错误的原因：a series of 少了个a，而且这个词组一般后面加可数名词的复数，而education不可数。
提升的句子：Educational programmes should be promoted to make people knowledgeable.
或者Educational programmes should be promoted to increase people's knowledge.
https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/SkkyjdbQrBMlwt4QyGqjow
8.26.18
小孩看电视的时间(screen time)一定要控制。
学生的句子： It is a must that the screen time of children should under control.
错误的原因：没有it is a must这种说法; under是个介词，should后面少一个动词。
提升的句子：Screen time of children should be controlled by adults.
或者 Children's screen time should be limited.
link: https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/Jvo2-ikrwFrRkWqO-PYijA
8.24.18
一些课程将育儿技能传授给年轻的妈妈。
学生的句子：Some lectures impart parenting skills to young mothers.
错误的原因：用词不恰当，lecture是大学的课程，parenting是教育孩子的技能，不是哺育孩子的技能。
提升的句子：Some courses impart childcare techniques to young mothers.
link：https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/r4Q1HWynwESao0FO3sm6Og
8.23.18
国际商务的迅速发展给贫穷国家提供很多机会。
学生的句子：The rapid development of international business has provided much opportunities for deprived countries.
错误的原因：much一般不修饰可数名词的复数，也不用在肯定语气。
提升的句子：The explosive growth of international commerce has offered poor countries many opportunities.
