高端写作技巧—同义词改写&关键思路&flipped sentences

政府类

1.young people take on important positions in the government

这个题目有两个重点，young 抽象是什么？年龄；important positions in the government是什么？领导力啊！深入分析就是领导能力和年龄是否有关系？？对于题目的解析要经过从具体——抽象——再到具体论述的过程。写作的过程其实非常有意思，题目就好像是给了一个奇葩说的辩题，可以有很多的角度去论证自己的观点，因为没有绝对正确的答案，理不辨不明就是这个道理。

【young people】发散思维啊！

同义词：younger candidates,

反义词：older members of the administrations, older officials，officier，elder，

【important positions】

高级细化版的同义词 a mayor, a director in some departments. 抽象一点叫啥？leader啊！！多么通用！写作没有充分的论述在于没有细致化场景，重要位置的人是谁？major，president，director in some departments（想想美丽的Brandy啊啊，已经是Director了！）

顺便吐槽一下趴趴写作的作文和写作模板，都是8-9分的水准，我才没有这么educated…粗人一个，我估计是写不出这么好的文章了，恩，读书少==

【leadership的要素】

#experience# are familiar with their own sectors---work efficiently and cooperate smoothly. 这个smoothly真的太有水平了，其实就是不同部门之间的撕逼，但是这么高端就表达出来了，真是强悍。

#charming characters#这个是领导人的个人魅力，这个不得不说和年龄无关，就用了这么简单的两个词啊！charming characters—encourage colleagues under his charge to make more efforts 忽悠法，通过个人魅力悠忽下属卖命工作。。。

#systematic education# better understanding of more advanced tools，like big data analysis

#working hours#年轻人体力好，干活时间长==

#ready and willing to change# 这个才是重点！！！

莫名就想来张这个配图！

让我怦然心动、眼前一亮、心脏停跳的句子！！！不达到这个标准我是不会收录进来的！！

【问题】Many people are moving from rural areas to big cities. Why has this happened? To what extent do you think it is a good trend?

1. Over the past decade（近年来的高端表述）, rural-urban migration has become one of the most significant trends in many countries, especially in developing countries.

2. In my opinion, people flock to big cities mainly in search of job opportunities and higher living standard, and I fully agree that this worrying trend has an adverse impact on both rural and urban communities.

一句话就清晰明了的表明了我的立场！！简直棒呆！

【问题】Some people think young people are not suitable for important positions in the government, while other people think it is a good idea for young people to take on these positions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

1.Being a public servant is one of the toughest jobs that anyone could ever have which also arouses an argument that some individuals suppose that young people are not suitable for important positions in the government while others propose that it is a good idea for young people to take on these positions.

2.In my opinion, I agree with the former view mentioned.

3.In conclusion, I still reckon that young people are not suitable in significant positions in the government.

写作的整体安排：装13开头结尾+充实不出错的body段。开头段要控制在3个句子以内，用一句话描述和引入，并交代清楚自己的观点。结尾段做简化处理，只有一句重申自己观点的话，In conclusion, I still reckon that +观点。开头装13，结尾简洁大方，中间不出错，这基本上就是6.5-7！加油！

小tips，如果要背句子，就只背开头的句子就可以，装13利器。。。body段自己拓展，结尾段霸气结束！对于开头一定要细细雕琢，这决定着第一印象！！