如何通过读外刊积累新颖地道的英文表达?
在英文写作的时候我们总是会有这样的苦恼:为什么我一个大学生写英文用的还是我小学时候学过的表达?为什么我的英文没有英国或是美国味儿?为什么我写英文似乎都是在做中英翻译?
如果你也有以上烦恼,那就跟随小编一起读外刊,学习地道英文表达吧!


说的这个意思,我们一般会想到solution这个词,还有没有其他词也可以表达呢?且看下文:
Makers of animal-free products aims to revolutionise the very idea of meat-but is their hi-tech approach really the answer?
这是《卫报》(The Guardian)一篇讨论人造肉制品能否解决环境问题的文章,上面这句话是导语。有没有在其中找到一个单词是表达“解决办法”的意思呢?
是的,就是那个我们熟悉的不能再熟悉的answer,我们来看一下Collins的解释:

在这里“an answer to…is…”就是“解决某事的办法是…”。
比如,有人认为禁止私家车通行可以缓解城市交通,但我认为这并不是解决的办法。
Some people argue that banning cars from the city can alleviate the traffic congestion, but I do not think that is the answer.

我们一般会用“environmental effect/impact”来表达这个意思,今天我们来学一个新的表达:
But some believe we should be skeptical of these claims. The original formulation had no cholesterol, but more salt and saturated fat than a Five Guys beef patty. As for its environmental footprint, many have criticized the push to eat more soy, which the Impossible Burger contains, since it is a soil-depleting mono-crop. (In case you’re wondering, the Impossible Burger is also not organic.)
找到“环境影响”的表达吗?没错,就是environmental footprint,先来看一下词典解释:

我们再来看一下footprint的意思:

原来footprint有一个含义就是“影响”。在例句里也可学习一下怎么表达“增加全球影响力”。
environmental footprint是一个环境术语,也可以叫做ecological footprint,我们再来看看Wikipedia对它的解释:
The ecological footprint (environmental footprint) measures human demand on nature, i.e., the quantity of nature it takes to support people or an economy. It tracks this demand through an ecological accounting system. The accounts contrast the biologically productive area people use for their consumption to the biologically productive area available within a region or the world (biocapacity, the productive area that can regenerate what people demand from nature). In short, it is a measure of human impact on Earth's ecosystem and reveals the dependence of the human economy on natural capital.
这个术语是衡量人类对地球生态环境的影响,揭示的是人类社会经济对自然资源的依赖性。

首先我们来看一段关于农业对环境带来的负面影响的描述:
By many measures, farming is one of the most environmentally straining things humans do. Agriculture contributes more greenhouse gas to the atmosphere than all “cars, trucks, trains and airplanes combined”, National Geographic reports. Deforestation for new farms, often carved out of forests and jungles, extinguishes biodiversity. And the waste collected by modern industrial animal farming contributes to ocean dead zones.
以前从来不知道农业的发展会对环境造成这么大的影响,现在知道自己吃下的每一口肉都会产生这么多的温室气体,下次吃肉的时候会不会犹豫一下呢?
虽然农业有这么大的“危害”,可是地球人口不断增长,我们敢不发展农业吗?
But with an additional 2 billion people projected to join us on Earth by 2050, farmers need to produce far more calories than we do now. The near-universal agreement among experts is that reducing the amount of meat you eat is the best way to reduce environmental harm.
有没有找出怎么表达“几乎所有…都同意/赞成…”呢?看来专家们都认为保护环境的最佳途径就是少吃肉。
表达提炼:The near-universal agreement among…is that…
比如,几乎所有人都认为环境保护刻不容缓。The near-universal agreement among people is that environmental protection is pressing.

这里的“良方”应该是指“有效的解决方案”,我们一起来看一看下面的文字,来找一找学习英语的“良方”:
In that context, people are seeking silver bullets for complex human diets. A group of Italian researchers recently looked at the diets of vegans, vegetarians and omnivores, and found even vegans who eat loads of processed foods can have an enormous environmental impact. (Fruitarians, interestingly, had an “extremely high environmental impact”.)
silver bullet是一个固定搭配,我们来看辞典解释:

原来这个意思起源于用银子弹射杀狼人。
比如在讲到如何处理犯罪问题,在反驳监狱能有效控制犯罪时,就可以说:Prison actually is not silver bullet for controlling crime.
这一段中提到了践行不同程度的素食主义的人的英文表达:
Vegan: a person who refrains from using any animal product whatever for food, clothing, or any other purpose (严格素食主义者)
Vegetarian: someone who is vegetarian never eats meat or fish. (素食主义者)
Flexitarian: a person who eats mainly vegetarian food but eats meat occasionally (弹性素食主义者)
Omnivore: a person that is naturally able to eat both plants and meat (杂食者)
Fruitarian: a person who only eats fruit (食果主义者)
在文章作者看来,素食并不一定环保。
整篇文章实际上是在质疑食用人造肉是否真的可以带来绿色环保,这一点通过它的文章标题就可以看出来:Inside the impossible burger: is the meat-free mega trend as good as we think? 通过标题来看作者的基本态度,从而把握住全文基调,这也是一个值得学习的阅读小技巧。
表达总结:
1. an answer to…is…:解决某事的办法是…
2. environmental footprint:环境影响
3. the near-universal agreement among…is that…:几乎所有的…都赞成…
4. silver bullets: 解决(难题)的良方
5. vegan:严格素食主义者
6. vegetarian:素食主义者
7. flexitarian:弹性素食主义者
8. omnivore:杂食者
9. fruitarian:食果主义者
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