段落的衔接到底怎么做?

衔接有三宝:逻辑、连接词、同义词。
什么叫“句子的通顺性”,用一句话解释:用通顺的文字表达你连续的思路,始终牢牢抓住你的读者。通顺的文字,指的是“正确使用每个单词”,将其组成一句“不需要花力气就能理解的句子”。比如:
It is undeniable that human activities pose a major threat to the environment.
这句话就很容易理解,几乎读完一遍你就能明白所传递的信息。
Today we pay attention to the quality of life more and more people want improve the health of body.
这句话就有问题了,缺少连接词,句子不通顺。
只要你读一遍,就能找出哪里出问题。想要提高段落的连贯性,首先就要解决句子通顺的问题。一旦你能写出通俗易懂的句子之后,就需要向下一个目标进发 ——“段落连贯性” 。
段落中的句子,想要彼此连贯,一气呵成,势必要满足逻辑、连接词、同义词三个条件:
1. 利用连接词,将句子紧密围绕在同一主题下
2. 独立句子有明确主题,前后句有同义词相呼应
3. 前后句之间,有清晰的逻辑关系
三者缺一不可。
比如下面一段话:
Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
有同学是这么回答secondary school学习英语的好处:
Learning foreign languages at secondary school can make them better understand the meaning of the words. For example, their brains are not developing well, so that they cannot comprehend words well.
这句话在连贯性上的问题,你发现了吗?第一句提到:在中学学习英语,可以让学生更好的理解单词的意思。第二句则说:举例说明学生的大脑还没发育完整,并不能很好地理解单词。第一句的主语是初中生,第二句的主语则是“大脑”。两句主语不统一,是不是对你理解造成了困难?提高衔接,最好的方法是“读”。我所说的读,不是范范的阅读,而是有技巧的,刻意训练。
举个例子:
Allied to this, it can be said that individuals in long-distance relationships benefit tremendously from this instant form of communication. No longer do people have to suffer when they are apart from their loved ones. As well as being able to speak to other people via the phone, individuals can also talk to each other face to face using one of the many ‘apps’ designed for this very purpose. If this were not advantageous enough, members of the public can also sit and order food from wherever they happen to be and have the food of their choice delivered to them. For exampleFoodpanda now does over 220,000 food orders direct to homes and offices in Thailand alone in just one month.
在这句话中
1. 红色 -连接词
2. 蓝色 -与蓝色呼应
3. 绿色 -与绿色呼应
4. 黄色 -与黄色呼应
好啦~以上就是段落连接的小技巧,你学会了么~
