四六级作文范文+结构分析
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay that begins with the sentence “Nowadays more and more people take a positive attitude towards life.” You can make comments, cite examples or use your personal experiences to develop your essay. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
范文
Nowadays more and more people take a positive attitude towards life. It is natural that difficulties hide in every corner of our life, so we have to face them now and then. But the problem is that sometimes we can do nothing to handle the challenging situations as our abilities are limited. In this case, what we can do is to change our attitude towards these difficulties. Just as the saying goes, “You cannot change the weather, but you can change your mood.”
Our attitude is the driving force of life. As a double-edged sword, it can either push us to do great things or make us lazy and shiftless. Looking around, we may find that people with a positive attitude often enjoy a better life and are more successful than those who are pessimistic. Therefore, it cannot be denied that a positive attitude does play an important role in living a successful life.
Above all, life isn't always a bed of roses. When the bad situation can't be changed, we should adjust ourselves to it and learn to keep optimistic. Only in this way can we surmount tough surroundings and gain more power to pursue our dreams.
文章句子结构分析
第一段①“Nowadays more and more people take a positive attitude towards life.”
这句话是一个简单的主谓宾结构。主语是“More and more people”，谓语是“take”，宾语是“a positive attitude towards life”。
②“It is natural that difficulties hide in every corner of our life, so we have to face them now and then.”
这是一个复合句，由两个分句组成。第一分句是一个主语从句，“It is natural that difficulties hide in every corner of our life”是主句，其中“it”是形式主语，“that difficulties hide in every corner of our life”是真正的主语。
第二分句“so we have to face them now and then”是一个并列句，其中“so”引导了一个表示原因的并列句，说明为什么“我们必须不时地面对它们”。
③“But the problem is that sometimes we can do nothing to handle the challenging situations as our abilities are limited. In this case, what we can
do is to change our attitude towards these difficulties. Just as the saying goes, ‘You cannot change the weather, but you can change your mood.’”
这也是一个复合句，由多个分句组成。第一分句“But the problem is that sometimes we can do nothing to handle the challenging situations as our abilities are limited”是一个主从复合句，其中“the problem is”是主语，“that sometimes we can do nothing to handle the challenging situations as our abilities are limited”是表语从句。
第二分句“In this case, what we can do is to change our attitude towards these difficulties”是一个主从复合句，其中“In this case”是状语，“what we can do”是主语，“is to change our attitude towards these difficulties”是表语。
第三分句“Just as the saying goes, ‘You cannot change the weather, but you can change your mood’”是一个并列句，其中包含一个直接引用的俗语：“你不能改变天气，但你可以改变你的心情。”
第二段①“Our attitude is the driving force of life.”
这句话是一个简单的主系表结构。主语是“Our attitude”，系动词是“is”，表语是“the driving force of life”。
②“As a double-edged sword, it can either push us to do great things or make us lazy and shiftless.”
这是一个复合句，由一个主句和一个从句组成。主句是“As a double-edged sword”，从句是“it can either push us to do great things or make us lazy and shiftless”。从句用来说明主句中的“双刃剑”的含义。
③“Looking around, we may find that people with a positive attitude often enjoy a better life and are more successful than those who are pessimistic.”
这句话也是一个简单的主谓宾结构。主语是“we”，谓语是“may find”，宾语是“that people with a positive attitude often enjoy a better life and are more successful than those who are pessimistic”。
④“Therefore, it cannot be denied that a positive attitude does play an important role in living a successful life.”
这句话是一个复合句，由一个主句和一个从句组成。主句是“Therefore, it cannot be denied that a positive attitude does play an important role in living a successful life”从句是“a positive attitude does play an important role in living a successful life”
第三段①“Above all, life isn't always a bed of roses.”
这是一个简单的主系表结构。主语是“life”，系动词是“isn't”，表语是“always a bed of roses”。
②“When the bad situation can't be changed, we should adjust ourselves to it and learn to keep optimistic.”
这是一个复合句，由一个主句和一个从句组成。主句是“we should adjust ourselves to it and learn to keep optimistic”，从句是“When the bad situation can't be changed”。从句用来说明主句中的情况。
③“Only in this way can we surmount tough surroundings and gain more power to pursue our dreams.”
这是一个倒装句，其正常语序应为：“Only in this way can we gain more power to pursue our dreams and surmount tough surroundings.”
整个段落是一个复合段落，第一句话提出了生活并不总是一帆风顺的观点，第二句话讲述了在面对困难时我们应该如何调整自己的态度，第三句话进一步说明只有保持乐观和积极的态度，我们才能克服困难并获得更多的力量去追求我们的梦想。
范文仿写
The Power of Positive Attitude
Nowadays, more and more people are adopting a positive attitude towards life. Despite the inevitability of difficulties, a positive attitude can help us face and overcome them. Our attitude is the driving force of life, influencing our quality of life and level of success.
A positive attitude enables us to handle challenges and pursue our dreams. When faced with a bad situation that cannot be changed, we should adjust ourselves to it and learn to keep optimistic. Only in this way can we surmount tough surroundings and gain more power to pursue our dreams.
In conclusion, a positive attitude is essential for a successful and fulfilling life.
