[自译] I'm So Lonely and Intact/我是如此单独而完整

下午在La Califfa这首曲子的评论区里看见了这首中文诗，我说，“心仿佛一下就被掏空了”。 实在是太过喜欢，于是前来机翻。由于既无素养全凭兴趣，所以毫无意境，不过我很开心。 “单独”“完整”在我看来应该是并列的，考虑再三使用了“and”。 I bear the freeze alone/ to the land / where a thin frost covering the forest/ for prattles of the birds/ for gleam of the sunrise/ for the gradually waking flowers and grasses/ sleeping in the earth/ but will not the spring whisper/ come never her sound/ I'm so lonely and intact/ countless the nights/ where Iresisting the ruthless cold wind/ standing still/ under the old-orange trees/ right at the bridgehead/ only for a sad song from Nightingale/ my leaning warm the stone-handrail moss/ while they cold down my heart/ but will not the night bird/ come never the night bird/ [原文]我是如此单独而完整 |徐志摩

我独自冒着冷＼ 去薄霜铺地的林子里＼ 为听鸟语 为盼朝阳＼ 为寻泥土里渐次苏醒的花草＼ 但春信不至 春信不至 我是如此单独而完整＼ 在无数个夜晚＼ 我独自顶着冷风＼ 伫立在老橘树下的桥头＼ 只为听一曲夜莺的哀歌＼ 我倚暖了石栏上的青苔＼ 青苔凉透了我的心坎＼ 但夜莺不来 夜莺不来